Your analysis is bold and original Sanusia. Your interpretation that the magazine cover can be understood as representing a power struggle between the bourgeoisie and the super-rich is fascinating.
Grade: C-
Target: use shorter sentences for clarity. Some of your sentences are long and a bit convoluted- see the first sentence of the first slide.
Your analysis is bold and original Sanusia. Your interpretation that the magazine cover can be understood as representing a power struggle between the bourgeoisie and the super-rich is fascinating.
ReplyDeleteGrade: C-
Target: use shorter sentences for clarity. Some of your sentences are long and a bit convoluted- see the first sentence of the first slide.
Mr Barlow